Jak, a boy born with power that the witches have not seen in a century, is their prophesied saviour. It is in severe need of a diligent editor; there are several grammatical and spelling mistakes on top of things just needing to be revised for a better reading flow. The ending feels about as satisfying as it was probably going to get, given the level of writing displayed throughout the rest of the book. But the chemistry is pretty good, the writing style is surprisingly comforting and the plot is entertaining enough.

A unique twist of a retelling of Beauty and the Beast, but make it hella gay, and with vampires, witches, and spirits! Everything is stated in quintriplicate dodecahedriquite, I don’t care if aren't words, that's how it felt. This could just as easily be changed to: "It would ruin the entire plan in a heartbeat should he find a candle etched with Mother's runes or a pack of tarot cards. The dislike for our villain felt a little shoe horned like you catch the one you are meant to dislike them and are left to run with it.

Because of how short this is, we don't get as much development on the romance side of things as we could have so there does feel like its a jump to love. Speaking of Claims, the Claims aren't really explained: why does the town need Claims if the castle is sealed and Marius can't leave? What amazes me is that not only did someone publish this story without noticing the mistakes but then several other people turned it into an audio book!

It's implied that he is a powerful witch with a lot of knowledge and he takes his mission very seriously, that he was deprived of normal pleasures and dedicated his entire life to training, but it's all told to us rather than shown. This is just something you have to get used to in the book, which admittedly gets easier the further in you go, because if nothing else it wears you down so much that you just accept your fate in this prose and syntax hellscape. The storyline and the characters always felt were at the edge of something great but never allowed to get there. That’s a just a sign you need to work through some shit and practice the ability to see other people as individuals. I'm looking forward to exploring this world and lore as it expands in future stories, as this book was very contained.Side from running his very own micro-publishing company, Oftomes, you can find Ben in the nearest Starbucks with a book in hand. If Jak is to avoid the tragedy of their fated meeting, he'll have to go against everything he's ever known to save Marius's life as well as his own. Finance is provided by PayPal Credit (a trading name of PayPal UK Ltd, Whittaker House, Whittaker Avenue, Richmond-Upon-Thames, Surrey, United Kingdom, TW9 1EH).

Ps: vi prego, qualcuno fermi questi/e protagonisti/e che passano pagine e pagine a commentare il “membro” del loro interesse amoroso 😂 e quanto è lungo, e quanto è grosso, addirittura non riesce a stringerlo bene tra le dita 😂😂 e fa i confronti con quello dei suoi precedenti amanti. However the witch's curse also backfired, draining the magic from the coven down to a negligible level from then on. This is clearly not the fault of the narrator I just don't think the sound of his voice worked for the content. Marius's life has no meaning; not since he was cursed into the twisted, bloodthirsty creature of night. Tenía tanta curiosidad por él que me suscribí a Kindle Unlimited para leerlo, y estoy feliz de haberlo hecho porque este fue mi gracia salvadora de un bloqueo lector.Quite frankly I find it pretty disrespectful of indie authors pushing out books without proper editing, and then having the cheek to over charge on physical copies. We are all just humans trying to find our way in this world, so own up to who you are and find a way to love yourself. Sabes que va a ver romance y magia, lo que no esperas es que el romance ocurra casi al final del libro, y que el prota tarde tanto tiempo en conocer la verdad. There's so many weirdly formulated sentences, and for some inexplicable reason they're in passive voice? La relazione tra i due protagonisti, che dovrebbe essere il fulcro del romanzo, è sviluppata male (secondo me).